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Steal or Fail comic script

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Panel 1 A hand is shown tapping against a desk.

Panel 2  A foot taps unsteadily.

Panel 3 the body of character 1. * Justen* sitting at a desk with an impatient look upon his face:

Justen narrates: Day in and day out it’s the same damn thing.  It’s like sitting in hell.

Panel  4 a glimpse at the teacher who is reading a text book.

Panel 5 a view of whole class teacher:

Mrs. Wattz : As you all know, there will be a test in 2 days. This particular test is highly crucial for your futures.  So if you fail, this will be written on your permeate records.

And I expect the best scores from out of you all especially you….

Panel 6 a boy not expecting to be called * Manny * A boy who had been sleeping  * Kris* Justen’s annoyed face, a boy with glasses smirking * kyle* the teacher names them all in each individual panel.

Panel 7 close up of teacher shutting her book. scowl. glare.

Mrs. Wattz :If all of you fail, that mean’s the class averages will drop, in turn hurting all of your grades. So study hard “guys” or else misfortune will surely come your way.

Panels 8 all gulping except for justen: who has a confident look In Justen’s Panel:
Justen: Don’t worry we’ll ace it.

Panel 9 bell rings.

Panel 10 panel of school hall

Panel 11 Panel of School from outside

Panel 12 Entrance door of school door opens and a group of kids are seen from a distance.

Panel 13 closer look at all the characters Manny looks distraught and looks down at the ground, Kris is about to light a cigarette, Kyle has his hands above his head stretching and Justin is in the middle of them all with his hands into his pockets:

Manny: What do I do? I haven’t passed any of Mrs. Wattz’s tests

Kris: Dude, She’s trip’n yo.

Kyle: Justen you’re quiet what’s up

Justen: I have a plan.

Panel 14 Kyle is looking at Justin with a confused look Justin is off screen

Kyle: What do you mean , you have a plan?

Panel 15 Justin with confident look and reply’s to Kyle who is off screen

Justen: Simple, if we want to pass the test, why don’t we just steal the answers.

Panel 16: Manny looks shock

manny: ARE YOU CRAZY?!

Panel 17: Kris takes a drag out of his cigarette

Panel 18: Kris blows smoke

Kris: Chill out man, Justen seems all-cool with it yo.

Panel 19: Justen’s back away from his friends

Justen: Damn straight Kris. Tell you what. Meet me at The Waffle House later And I’ll tell you all about it.

Panel  20: Kyle, Manny and Kris look at each other

Panel 21: Manny looks at Kris and Kyle with a worry look.

Manny: Are you guys still up to this?  

Kris: Shoot, I don’t give a damn, yo.

Kyle: Well Justen is my cousin, I’m curious as to what He has up his sleeve this

Panel 22:  All guys nod

All: Right.

Panel 23 shot of Waffle house

Panel 24:  Justen sitting at a booth

Justen Narrates: Tonight will be the night, I am not taking any chances

Panel 25: Manny Kris, Kyle walk into the dinner

Justen continues: Ah, yes my friends, looks like they’ve finally decided to show up.

Panel 26: All guys gather around Justen’s booth

Kyle: So what’s the plan cuz

Justen: Break in, steal the test answers to the test and go. Simple as that.

Panel 27: panel  split with manny and Justen

Manny: That’s nice and all but how are we going to do that?

Justen: I’ve already rigged the doors so we can get in with out breaking anything.

Panel 28: Kris is amazed kyle is confused

Kris: WHOA! Dude how you did that yo?

Kyle: You’re tell’n me, when did you have time to do this?

Panel 29: Justen narrates how he did it:

Every morning at 6, I have  cross country practice.  Couch usually unlocks the gym so we  can get changed before we head out to run.

Panel 30 continues:

However, lately, I’ve noticed Couch tends to leave his keys in his PE office unattended before we leave for practice.  In fact those keys pretty much have every key to the main doors to the school building.

Panel 31 continues:

I simply took the key to the  back entrance, gym and  the hall way to Mrs. Wattz’s class room and  made copies  thanks to my dad’s auto shop.

Panel 32:  Justen slides the copied keys on the table

Justen: See there they are
My script for my Narrative Illustration class. this is for my final in there which is creating a complete comic book O.o

sadly it can't be anything fantasy like which I would of cooked up in no time >< so I used real people I knew in a made up situation.

I know there are grammar errors like EVERY where so DON'T point them out.

what I do need help on is that this is 32 panels long, however I need it to shorten it to 30 panels. in that case I need help

Picture found off of google
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Gamegirl855's avatar
Do you mind if i used this for a model script?Wasn't sure about the script format. :P